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I came across him,
rubbish and debris encircling
him like a garbage cloud,
sitting cross legged,
muttering and rocking, dribbles
of spit dangling off the sides
of his lips, spoke words I'd
declare arcane.

In the center of somewhat
of a pure white, bright
metal cage, he'd often kick
a bar, bark at the open space
or twirl a key dangling from his
neck, running his dirty fingers
up and down the shaft.

Twelve feet by twelve feet had
to be the dimensions of his home.
His torture, his insufferable misery.
My foot steps quieted his musings,
weary eyes meeting mine, me, this traveler,
journeyer, a voyage across time and
lands for understanding.

"Help me, noble sir, help me, please.
Release me from this insufferable
torment, free me, find a way out!"
His cries, so desperate, his pain,
very evident; devise a plan, devise a plan
I must to assist such a noble human.

  We all have rights, the Greeks
  debated on this, the Romans conquered
  such thinking, and I, I shall promote it.

Searching, prodding, looking about
yielded no fruitful hope, no possible
salvation. "Try, you must! Help
this downtrodden lad live life to the full!"
His cries brought a tear to
my arid eyes.

Through it, clarity shone forth,
the lock on the wretched cage
seeming to match the key he exactly
held within his hands.

"Pray tell, dear sir, the key that
wraps around your neck so,
the one you fondle with your fingers;
perchance that might work the lock undone?"
I ventured the only offer of freedom I
could conjure up.

"Well, yes, of course it opens the
lock. But what I need is a way out of
this insufferable metallic beast!"
he retorted. "Have you not been listening?"

"I do not understand," I began again.
"If the key opens the lock, why not use it?"

The man looked at the key in his hand
for quite some time, slowly raising
a blank stare and asked so genuinely,
"Why ever would I do that?"
©2008-2009 ~Clippers0507
:iconclippers0507:

Author's Comments

~the simple answer isn't for me, no sir~

So many times, the answer we so desperately seek isn't too far away. We just don't want to accept it.

Day Two, Poem Two of the National Poetry Month thing. I swear I'll get the name right before this month is over. lol

Listening to: Simpsons episodes

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:iconheart-mojo:
I like this very much, so many people do this, and won't listen to a work of advice from anyone.
fabulous.

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and sit on the swings
let's hold hands
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:iconbohemianpoets:
i just noticed that your very precise with detail, i love it :heart: im going to have to re-read this again! the flood in my inbox is got my mind sort of occupied

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"Wake up! just close your eyes.. i wanted to tell you, i think i'm ready, i'm ready to free fall in the unknown."-Bohemianpoets.
:iconlilithlairpoetry:
Finally a true philosophical poem...I heart you...

:)

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You are the air I breathe...~SicilianGoddess
:iconclippers0507:
Aww, thank you so much! I'm so happy you liked this. :)

--
My boy, if silence is golden, you are bankrupt. -
Charlie Chan
:iconclippers0507:
I know how that is... My inbox today was actually quite full for the first time in a LONG time. Felt odd and cool at the same time. :)

So happy you like this, too. :hug:

--
My boy, if silence is golden, you are bankrupt. -
Charlie Chan
:iconclippers0507:
Thank you so much. :)

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My boy, if silence is golden, you are bankrupt. -
Charlie Chan
:iconbohemianpoets:
oh i wish mine were empty. it would please me lol i still have faves and comments to reply to that date back from feb. thats just depressing

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"Wake up! just close your eyes.. i wanted to tell you, i think i'm ready, i'm ready to free fall in the unknown."-Bohemianpoets.
:iconclippers0507:
That's because you're super talented and being pretty just doesn't help at all, either. ;) I'm sure you'll get them all filtered out soon enough. And hey, at least mine are answered! :D

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My boy, if silence is golden, you are bankrupt. -
Charlie Chan
:iconbohemianpoets:
hahaha! well regardless of how much mail and such i get i pretty much attend to yours first! =D

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"Wake up! just close your eyes.. i wanted to tell you, i think i'm ready, i'm ready to free fall in the unknown."-Bohemianpoets.

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