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Colon, Closed Parenthesis by ~Clippers0507:iconClippers0507:



Knew something was amiss
when it was more than a slip
in tongue that kept her calls
far away at bay for longer than

a few days. Trips to local florist;
chrysanthemums, daisies and
hydrangeas stemming to my apology,
a truce along with a peace offering

with my offer to once again hold fast
her heart so close once more.
An impatient wait meted with
a want to sedate this worried heart

of mine seemed to be a fleeting wish
dangling off lips from remorsed lovers
or me. And the hours lapsed like years,
wondering if the delivery even reached

her, my regret, the most simplistic,
basic form. Ah! But would a presentation
of such a possibly trite form sway her
beating heart to return, revert back to...

Vibration on phone, text msg to me
from her. Pulse rate intensifying,
frighten to even look, yearning, dying
to know her reply and in this tug

of emotions, I managed to sneak
a peek and a smile sneaked
alongside with my gleaming eyes;
tears were in order, but I held back.

Luv th flwrs, babe.
They beautiful. I'm sry 2.
Call me ltr, k?
Luv you. :)
©2008-2009 ~Clippers0507
:iconclippers0507:

Author's Comments

~will say sorry a thousand times if you'll return~

Listening to: The Killers - Glamorous Indie Rock and Roll

Poem Twenty-Eight, Day Twenty-Eight

Yes, yes, I know I'm behind (I'm behind in my messages, too, so apologies to all who commented or faved and I haven't gotten back to you) but I'm so tired these days, coming home quite late. Alas and oh well.

The title came to me and it just flowed after that. Proud of me, I stuck to an actual form this time. lol Wasn't too lazy for once.

Enjoy, friends. :)

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:iconhauntingmewithsmiles:
:)?

--

"You impersonate a person better than a zombie should."
--Company
PHOTOS. STOCK.

:boing:
:iconclippers0507:
Of course!

--
My boy, if silence is golden, you are bankrupt. -
Charlie Chan
:iconpoisonedrose:
I like the text message at the end, very authentic. :)

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-- J :butterfly:

:bulletblack:#Writers-Workshop:bulletblack:
:iconocean-flute:
Aw... =)

Girls are such suckers for flowers. I've always tried to figure out why that is...Considering, y'know...flowers....transient...they wilt all over the place and everything...

In any case, genuine emotion, and just really cute. =D
:iconthornyenglishrose:
What they all said. :thumbsup:

--
Be inspired: *simplyprose and *simplypoetry.

Save trees and elephants! Check out poopoopaper.com!
:iconhauntingmewithsmiles:
will *actually* comment later.

It was late at night and I couldn't remember what a colon was! Haha.

--

"You impersonate a person better than a zombie should."
--Company
PHOTOS. STOCK.

:boing:
:iconalexa88:
ending was the best :D
:iconhauntingmewithsmiles:
Okay. This is...really, really sweet.

I mean, adorable.

:]

and good job on maintaining a form!

--

"You impersonate a person better than a zombie should."
--Company
PHOTOS. STOCK.

:boing:
:iconclippers0507:
Thank you, thank you! I was hoping the sweetness was coming through. :D

--
My boy, if silence is golden, you are bankrupt. -
Charlie Chan

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