I still say Hibiscus tea
is one of the more
romantic varieties
but you insist it needs
lemongrass added;
too bitter on it's own,
you won't stand for it.
Swirling invisible pencil
tracings on the cracks and
seams of this table,
you hum a tune conjured
on the fly and I turn
a weary eye to the sky,
the gray mass supplying
fullness to my cheeks.
I catch you glancing at
me, asking what I'm smiling
at, or for - one of the two and
I start a tangent on the
depth of Chaucer and the
ingenuity of Does It Offend You,
Yeah? then backtrack, say
I don't know a thing about
Chaucer; saying his name makes
me seem dapper, though I do
confess my love of
Vivaldi and with the same
breath, express envy for his
magnificent Autumn, wishing
it could be one movement longer.
This lazy Autumn gray sky
astounds my senses; dull is
too inadequate a word,
insensible. Bliss seeps this quiet
afternoon, bluejays fly between
the Pines and your hand delineates a
fine line on mine; overtime we'll
tire of this simplicity
my friends tell me, the journals, the
professional love doctors, and
especially the women, flirty
and curvaceous, touchy, never
finding clothes that fit just right.
Ive oft been accused of
being in the unhealthy
habit of attempting to
prove someone entirely wrong
almost all the time.
A drop of rain hits
our windowpane
as the sky winks at me
while I sip my tea watching
your grimace re-appear
for my lack of lemongrass.














Comments
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My boy, if silence is golden, you are bankrupt. -
Charlie Chan
your use of terms is extraordinary, it makes the style.
"swirling visible pencil" its these subtle, little visual details that leave me in awe
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"Wake up! just close your eyes.. i wanted to tell you, i think i'm ready, i'm ready to free fall in the unknown."-Bohemianpoets.
--
My boy, if silence is golden, you are bankrupt. -
Charlie Chan
what i mean is if its obvious in an indirect way then its won me over, but the clear here it is' sort of writings throw me off, i suppose it all depends on how its written
--
"Wake up! just close your eyes.. i wanted to tell you, i think i'm ready, i'm ready to free fall in the unknown."-Bohemianpoets.
--
My boy, if silence is golden, you are bankrupt. -
Charlie Chan
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