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He got the chip off his
shoulder ages ago,
imagined his walk to have
a skip in it and with song
in his heart, knew nothing would
cast a shadow of gloom on
his agenda, mission called
Life and Living.

Saw fortunes fly quick away,
scuffle of stumbling feet
creped and wrapped him
in a tangle mess,
tripping over and falling down,
hard, ever so hard
to the dirty ground,
scraping his shin, bruising his
knee, sitting in a bloodies mess,
cries filtering and spreading
throughout the air,
looking back through
overly animated tears
at the source of his fall -
  a solitary ant.

"How could you?!" he spat.
"How could you walk in
front of me like that and trip
me up?! I didn't even see you!"

The ant looked flabbergasted.
"I would think, dear sir,
that you would resort, without
knowledge, I already know,
to squash me dead instead
of allowing a small, insignificant
problem like me to trip
you up so easily."
©2008-2009 ~Clippers0507
:iconclippers0507:

Author's Comments

~such a rude, insolent creature!~

Listening to: Coheed and Cambria - Feathers

Poem Twenty-Seven, Day Twenty-Seven

I'm sure this idea has been done before, but this one has been on the ol brain for a while now. The ending wasn't too abrupt was it?

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:iconthornyenglishrose:
Not too abrupt at all. Like it. :)

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:icondracula-alucard-vamp:
Okay, one error,

overtly animated tears
should be:
overly animated tears


VERY VERY small, but still..

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:iconhauntingmewithsmiles:
hm, I like this.

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"You impersonate a person better than a zombie should."
--Company
PHOTOS. STOCK.

:boing:
:iconclippers0507:
Splendid. :D

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My boy, if silence is golden, you are bankrupt. -
Charlie Chan
:iconclippers0507:
Dang, I was like.... that DOESN'T sound right.... Yeah, you're so right. Thanks muchly. (yes, I know THAT'S not a real word! lol ) :hug:

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My boy, if silence is golden, you are bankrupt. -
Charlie Chan
:iconclippers0507:
Perfect. :heart:

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My boy, if silence is golden, you are bankrupt. -
Charlie Chan
:icondracula-alucard-vamp:
:hug:

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Please leave all overcoats canes and, top hats, with the doorman, from that moment you'll be out of place and underdressed.

Name the artist and get a cookie!! :cookie:
:iconbohemianpoets:
it is perfect.

the full title sends an animated smile to my heart, not sure why but it does and thats never a bad thing

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"Wake up! just close your eyes.. i wanted to tell you, i think i'm ready, i'm ready to free fall in the unknown."-Bohemianpoets.
:iconclippers0507:
:D

--
My boy, if silence is golden, you are bankrupt. -
Charlie Chan

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