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Such A Slight Transgression by ~Clippers0507:iconClippers0507:



Forgive me sir,
for not dressing,
speaking, greeting
like you do, in the hood,
my home, your home,
our home.
   my environment
   hasn't made me,
   dear sir, my
   imagination, my
   imagination has


Forgive me sir,
no disrespect do I
give when I grant myself
a different path to live;
no ignoramus traces,
assurance, in these places
I once roamed.
   they once tried to
   fit the word "ghetto"
   on my person and
   scoffed at the notion
   I lived with it for years


Forgive me ma'am...
O, girl, mama, pardon the
initial label, not to make you
seem old, though your body
you keep giving to the guys
(they say you give the best)
is close to beat, so beat,

but again

forgive me ma'am -
I'll go back to calling your
seventeen sweetness that -
for not shedding a tear
for you, though three
for the two you tug along,
holding Dominique, pushing
Laquincel in her stroller, three
and one and a half; their father
would be proud, ah, but where
does he live? We'll find him together.
   I'll roil inside as you
   tell Laquincel to shut up
   for crying aloud in the cold
   windy day - she'll be better
   once you give her some
   Cheetos


Forgive me Night,
I love you, truly,
though I need the
light to befriend me on the
journey home cause these
people don't know their
wrong from their right.
   hooded figures
   figure there's always
   a way to get something
   when their nothing is
   becoming too much


Forgive me Philadelphia,
everyone's blaming you, no
one's taking the blame themselves,
for we are a murderous people,
traitorous thieves, hounding
rouges that are misunderstood,
but our downtown is looking quite lovely.
   I hear they'll
   be opening a
   Apple store
   down there quite
   soon


Forgive me, dear sirs,
forgive me, dear madams,
I would never mean to encroach
upon any stereotypes you would
keep this fine city in.
It simply troubles me
they stay so, so deeply entrenched.
   along with everything
   you think should be
   about me
©2008-2009 ~Clippers0507
:iconclippers0507:

Author's Comments

~a difference, a difference, such a difference~

Starting the first piece for the National Poetry Month thingie.

Day One, Poem One.

Wrote this fifteen minutes ago and am quite pleased, though how I'll feel in the morning possibly will be different. When people would get to know me, know my interest, my likes and the sort, they would always be shocked as to where I live (in the ghetto, basically) and guess that I didn't grow up here. I did and have and still live here, but because I'm not the stereotypical ignorant angry person living in a violent, prostitute filled neighborhood, I obviously didn't grow up here. Ahh, the stereotypes of life. :)

Listening to: me typing away

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:iconbohemianpoets:
"I hear they'll
be opening a
Apple store
down there quite
soon."
- simply devine

--
"Wake up! just close your eyes.. i wanted to tell you, i think i'm ready, i'm ready to free fall in the unknown."-Bohemianpoets.
:iconbitterev:
starting with forgive?))

--
(c)ev.

•evil gets an upgrade•

Фрау Мяу

﴾͡๏̯͡๏﴿
:iconmyheartsong:
I like how you address every group...and how you ask forgiveness for the stereotype you address, and they fill. I just...I like it. As Jazz said 'simply divine'

--
What am I supposed to do, when the best part of me was always you?
:iconelevenofhearts:
indeed

--
whatever i just said was probably a lie
:iconclippers0507:
:)

--
My boy, if silence is golden, you are bankrupt. -
Charlie Chan
:iconclippers0507:
Thank you so much. I'm glad you like this. This subject is something on my mind often, and I always try to present it nicely. The concept came to me on my walk home last night, actually. :aww: Glad you like it. :hug:

--
My boy, if silence is golden, you are bankrupt. -
Charlie Chan
:iconclippers0507:
Not a good start? :-/

--
My boy, if silence is golden, you are bankrupt. -
Charlie Chan
:iconclippers0507:
:hug:

--
My boy, if silence is golden, you are bankrupt. -
Charlie Chan
:iconbitterev:
i love it..))

--
(c)ev.

•evil gets an upgrade•

Фрау Мяу

﴾͡๏̯͡๏﴿

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