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Summer Jane, Pt. 2 by ~Clippers0507:iconClippers0507:



Hacking up a loogie,
wiping his nose on his sleeve,
he's those derelicts you read
about in the novels,
romanticize with your girlfriends
on what your exploits
together would be,
could be, should be.

Playing complete scenarios out,
it's a canvas of radical
ideas and a young ignorance.

Your shoes don't match and
you're perfect like that,
so European, so fashionable.
We look in envy and
you hope your eyes sparkle
enough for him to notice.
He just keeps noticing the
bust lines on the bronzed
beauties on the beach front,
but you don’t mind.

It's okay. A paradigm
of the best stories the
tabloids will have on
you when you're famous.
It'll be such an interesting story.
©2008-2009 ~Clippers0507
:iconclippers0507:

Author's Comments

~She's so storybook ready, so glamorous~

Day Nineteen, Poem Nineteen

Listening to: The Kills - Cheap And Cheerful

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:iconbohemianpoets:
i love it, when your style is never one direct ..style,
its paints a scene of a sort of famous romance =D

--
"Wake up! just close your eyes.. i wanted to tell you, i think i'm ready, i'm ready to free fall in the unknown."-Bohemianpoets.
:iconclippers0507:
Thank you so much, goodness. That has ALWAYS been my fear, concern when it comes to my poems, works. I worry that me dabbling in too many different styles will get annoying for the reader, but I guess it's not. :D Thank you. I, personally, get tired doing the same style or same topic all the time, thus why I'm always changing it up. :hug:

--
My boy, if silence is golden, you are bankrupt. -
Charlie Chan

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