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We Want To Be Better by ~Clippers0507:iconClippers0507:



We poets are emotional,
fragile creatures, fashioned into
bodies fleshly to you, foreign
to us, awkward in our skin,
we feel awkward in our stance.

We want to be
like you, we want to be
cool like you, drinking
Skyy Vodka, dressing beyond stylistically
fly, but we're stuck on the
runway, words jumbled in
our minds; the control tower's
out to lunch and there's
a million things we want to say.

Forgive our sensitivity -
dear lovers, forgive our
transgressions, making ourselves
sick, bowing to the Porcelain God,
wasting our insides out.
Pretty words with pretty
handwriting, we think that's
compensation enough.

We hope that's compensation
enough.
Never lauded, it's all we
have to offer.
©2008-2009 ~Clippers0507
:iconclippers0507:

Author's Comments

~we try to be better, we can't achieve but so much~

Poem Twenty, Day Twenty

Listening to: With A Heavy Heart (I Regret To Inform You)

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:iconhauntingmewithsmiles:
ya know, I like this a lot.
Actually, I was thinking today about how I'd love to live the life of someone else.
It can't be that easy to be so graceful and clever--and above all things, happy.

--

"You impersonate a person better than a zombie should."
--Company
PHOTOS. STOCK.

:boing:
:iconclippers0507:
Yes, yes. It's a constant problem/plague for me, to just not be so insecure. :hug:

--
My boy, if silence is golden, you are bankrupt. -
Charlie Chan
:iconheart-mojo:
... :tears:
you've made me feel all teary....

--
Let's go to the park
and sit on the swings
let's hold hands
and speak sweet things
:heart:

I am Scorpius Malfoy in the deviantART Harry Potter Crew!
:iconrenderedhelpless:
I have never identified more clearly with a poem.

--
I heard the door close
not slamming, but slinking shut
in an unfortunate and unhappy desire to be undetected
as if secrecy could lessen the pain....
:iconreldadark:
It's so pretty <3

You make great poems <3

~Hearts

--
"LOVE IS LOVE. PERIOD."
"Don't walk in front of me...I might not follow...Don't walk behind me...I might not lead. Walk beside me and be my friend."
:iconmidnight-dreamer-11:
Beautiful.:frail:
:heart:

--
:frail: I'm a poet. I understand the power of words.:frail:
:heart:
:iconhauntingmewithsmiles:
numero dos on the poetry popular page!

--

"You impersonate a person better than a zombie should."
--Company
PHOTOS. STOCK.

:boing:
:iconmissy7:
Um...this....wow! Maybe its partially because I didn't get much sleep last night and its kinda late, but this poem had such an effect on me. It is so well written and the feelings are too true.... I nearly cried when I read this - its like being slammed into a wall while really watching it from above.

--
"Hide not your talents. For use they were made. What's a sundial in the shade?" -Benjamin Franklin
:iconshinigami-of-death02:
wow, that's great, it's pretty true too

--
Anime is the awesomeness of awesomeness
Manga totally owns
Noobs = hackers, not those who suck at games, at least they try
Twilight = Opium for all the teenage girls who like vampires
Video Games warped my brain, and its AWESOME
I want vectors to own
yep.
:iconclippers0507:
Aww, thanks so much. :hug:

--
My boy, if silence is golden, you are bankrupt. -
Charlie Chan

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