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banshee's silent wail by ~Clippers0507:iconClippers0507:



a million smiles lighting up
this barren night sky that
we notice are all ours,
captured with goals undeterred,
with beauty unspoken and
passions yet roused.

these trails of assurance and
confidence exemplified
through our steps,
our walk gliding, floating
over every ounce
of pain that exists to
move into a newer

existence of coffee breath and
poetic expressions scribbled
on walls in
our bedroom,
in hearts, our hearts;
      touching.

we say with finality that
we've arrived some place
safe, the whole world
our playground and
our limits are about
as real as
banshees wails -
  we're going to
      live forever
©2008-2009 ~Clippers0507
:iconclippers0507:

Author's Comments

~what can stop us at this point?~

If you're completely unlearned about Banshees, here's a brief except from Wiki: In Irish legend, a banshee wails around a house if someone in the house is about to die.

Hope that last part makes more sense in my poem now. ;)

Day Six, Poem Six

Listening to: Bones - The Killers

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:iconheart-mojo:
I lovelovelove the last paragraph.
I can't think of the words to say why, but i don't think they're really neccissary anyway.
:heart:

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and sit on the swings
let's hold hands
and speak sweet things
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:iconbossanova3:
wow, this is amazing. good job

--
The Omega is the Alpha.
:iconclippers0507:
Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it. :D

--
My boy, if silence is golden, you are bankrupt. -
Charlie Chan
:iconclippers0507:
Really? Thanks so much, man, that means a lot to me. :)

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My boy, if silence is golden, you are bankrupt. -
Charlie Chan
:iconbohemianpoets:
why am i even surprised that you write so well?
and even more shocked at your ability to strike me on awe each and every time.

i think i've just been inspired

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"Wake up! just close your eyes.. i wanted to tell you, i think i'm ready, i'm ready to free fall in the unknown."-Bohemianpoets.
:iconclippers0507:
Now you know how I feel EVERY time you post ANYTHING new. It's like... WHOA. I love it... :heart:

Glad you enjoyed this. :)

--
My boy, if silence is golden, you are bankrupt. -
Charlie Chan
:iconbohemianpoets:
GAH! :glomp: :heart: waay to make my day! =D

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"Wake up! just close your eyes.. i wanted to tell you, i think i'm ready, i'm ready to free fall in the unknown."-Bohemianpoets.
:iconlittlelottexo:
This is beautiful.

--

"Love all. Trust few. Do wrong to no one."
:iconclippers0507:
Thank you so much. :heart: :hug:

--
My boy, if silence is golden, you are bankrupt. -
Charlie Chan

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