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"Barrage" Is An... by ~Clippers0507:iconClippers0507:



The slight seems
    ever so tiny
an offense,
   no biggie,
         "get-over-it",
and I still don't
   understand how you
could say it so easily.

I'm a easy bruiser;
my heart sank
like some      ill fated
                                     s
                                        h
                                           i
                                             p.

Cannon-fire speech
sounds like pea-shooters
to you; it'll never change.
©2008-2009 ~Clippers0507
:iconclippers0507:

Author's Comments

~going down, you're taking me down~

Listening to: People talking

Poem Ten, Day Ten

Full Title: "Barrage" Is An Understatement

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:iconyouinventedme:
great

xo!

--
an antique arms and armor expert
:iconbohemianpoets:
:( awwh gave me a very sinking feeling,

felt most subjective.

:heart:

familiar feeling, i find this very moving.

--
"Wake up! just close your eyes.. i wanted to tell you, i think i'm ready, i'm ready to free fall in the unknown."-Bohemianpoets.
:iconclippers0507:
:hug:

--
My boy, if silence is golden, you are bankrupt. -
Charlie Chan
:iconmyheartsong:
I like that you always manage to evoke an emotion...and you're good at it. Considering my mood today, this tapped into that aching feeling I have...I like that kind of writing...that's true talent. Just saying :]

--
What am I supposed to do, when the best part of me was always you?
:iconclippers0507:
Aww, thank you so much. :D :hug: Glad you like it so much and I try to evoke SOMETHING. :)

--
My boy, if silence is golden, you are bankrupt. -
Charlie Chan

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April 10, 2008
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