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san francisco early mornings by ~Clippers0507:iconClippers0507:



coffee smells this
  small apartment room,
stepping over
lingerie, jeans,
  basking in spring's sun
streaming through bay windows.

glance over to
   delicate sheets
  draped in
delicate ways;
you glow in your
   sleep.

watch your chest
   rise and fall,
I smell of intimacy,
   of fresh serenity;
existence moved light-years
     above bearable.
©2008-2009 ~Clippers0507
:iconclippers0507:

Author's Comments

~the fog cleared up, it wasn't a dream; you slept so beautifully~

Listening to: An episode of FRIENDS!!! :dance:

Poem Seventeen, Day Seventeen

NOTE: Yeah, umm, this weekend, I'm so gonna be no where near a computer so I'll still be writing, but I'll post them retroactively. :)

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:iconpoisonedrose:
'...light-years
above bearable.'

What a beautiful way to end a poem. :heart:

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-- J :butterfly:

:bulletblack:#Writers-Workshop:bulletblack:
:iconbohemianpoets:
incredible,
the full title itself was captivating i cant express that enough :heart:

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"Wake up! just close your eyes.. i wanted to tell you, i think i'm ready, i'm ready to free fall in the unknown."-Bohemianpoets.
:iconclippers0507:
Wow, really? I really pride myself on my titles, too. Thanks so much!

--
My boy, if silence is golden, you are bankrupt. -
Charlie Chan
:iconclippers0507:
Thank you. I really like this ending too.

--
My boy, if silence is golden, you are bankrupt. -
Charlie Chan
:iconbohemianpoets:
hahaha its amazing because your titles complete your written words its sensational :heart:

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"Wake up! just close your eyes.. i wanted to tell you, i think i'm ready, i'm ready to free fall in the unknown."-Bohemianpoets.
:iconclippers0507:
:hug:

--
My boy, if silence is golden, you are bankrupt. -
Charlie Chan

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