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sultry san francisco blues by ~Clippers0507:iconClippers0507:



she kissed me with smoky lips,
and though I never liked
the taste of Marlboro,
I liked the swirl of
her tongue
mingling with mine.

  sea air always
fared my heart steady
well, majestic the
pacific tempest rest,
coating my skin with
salty glaze.

she stared into
my hazel orbs,
a dazed look,
wrapped in a
lovers haze, placing
confidence in the seats
of shaky ambition.

we stayed atop
that rock, seawater
misting my eyes; i swear
i'm not crying - though this
is a near perfect moment
©2008-2009 ~Clippers0507
:iconclippers0507:

Author's Comments

~mist always frizzes your hair~

Listening to: Me typing

Poem Eleven, Day Eleven

I'm SO stinkin tired... Sorry bout that last piece you just read. It's one of those tired days. x.x

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:iconyouinventedme:
lovely

xo!

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an antique arms and armor expert
:iconbohemianpoets:
oh wow.. this makes me want to be with the love of my life. and stay in such moments.

O_*

i love this kick your on, even if your tired :( i hope your resting so you can come back and write more =D haha simply for my reading pleasure of course :glomp::heart:

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"Wake up! just close your eyes.. i wanted to tell you, i think i'm ready, i'm ready to free fall in the unknown."-Bohemianpoets.
:iconclippers0507:
As long as someone gets pleasure from my writing, I'm all for it! :D I'm trying to feel better, but tiredness has a way of hitting you and not going away for quite some time, you know?

--
My boy, if silence is golden, you are bankrupt. -
Charlie Chan
:iconclippers0507:
Thank you!

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My boy, if silence is golden, you are bankrupt. -
Charlie Chan
:iconbohemianpoets:
hmmm :aww: i know exactly what you mean, :hug:

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"Wake up! just close your eyes.. i wanted to tell you, i think i'm ready, i'm ready to free fall in the unknown."-Bohemianpoets.
:iconxx-dear-prudence-xx:
i love this! i could re-read the second stanza all day.. gorgeous

--
"For the Dalai Lama, every conversation is a DMC"
:ignore:
:iconclippers0507:
ooo, this is an oldie, too. i forgot about this one. thanks!

--
My boy, if silence is golden, you are bankrupt. -
Charlie Chan
:iconxx-dear-prudence-xx:
no problem, i had another look at your gallery and it... is... amazing! :+devwatch:
ps. thanks for the fav :)

--
"For the Dalai Lama, every conversation is a DMC"
:ignore:
:iconclippers0507:
Heck, thanks for the love! :heart:

--
My boy, if silence is golden, you are bankrupt. -
Charlie Chan

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