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they'll say they were... by ~Clippers0507:iconClippers0507:



the gun looked liked something
he would have seen in a overtly
violent graphic novel, the blood

pouring out her side in comical,
copious, suspend-belief amounts,
an ounce shy of a gallon, he surmised,
surprised once he finished looking on
only to find his reflection returning

a fascinated gaze towards the killer's
fierce stance; he was worse off
than any comic book character he
could have ever read about and the

woman that lay dying seemed as
tragic as any love poem he could
have ever penned. the papers would
sensationalize the situation,

but the simple truth that he hated
her and him and the attachment of
"them" would bore the papers.
coming to grips with such an outcome
made his shots bearable. he thought
the ring of the barrel sounded

extraordinary and imagined he felt
a smile painted on his face as
darkness seemed like the brightest color
the world hadn't yet discovered,
can only discover when the body
goes numb and breathing seems so
superfluous.
©2009 ~Clippers0507
:iconclippers0507:

Author's Comments

~he couldn't remember the last time he felt so happy~

full title: they'll say they were tragic lovers; he'll say they were tragic

Categories; goodness, which? Was really thinking of Transgressive, but thought all the hardcore Transgressive types would be peeved that it wasn't THAT bad; thought of Horror, but I wasn't too scared reading/writing this and there isn't much Philosophy in this piece, either. Categories get harder and harder the older I get.

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:icontemeraki:
That was interestingly creepy. I like it!
:iconclippers0507:
Yes!

--
My boy, if silence is golden, you are bankrupt. -
Charlie Chan
:iconalexa88:
So, he shot her then himself? Ah, okay. well, i do like the color black, so good job :D
:iconclippers0507:
Yeah, poor things. Never had a chance.
;)

--
My boy, if silence is golden, you are bankrupt. -
Charlie Chan

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